Re: Scott Kalitta Fatal Crash VideoOn Jun 22, 3:41 pm, ~M~ <mwillnotr...@gmail,com > wrote:
> On Sun, 22 Jun 2008 09:23:12 -0700 (PDT), jpchick
>
> <jpchic...@gmail,com > wrote:
> >> >Often times, until there is an issue with something,
> >> >the simplest things, after the fact, are so obvious..
>
> >> Huh?
>
> >LMFAO.... after all that drivel you just spewed, you still don't get
> >the basics.... priceless, really.
>
> "Often times, until there is an issue with something, the simplest
> things, after the fact, are so obvious."
>
> The sentence above does not make sense in the English language. The
> introductory phrase, "often times, until there is an issue with
> something" does not connect to the conclusion, "the simplest things,
> after the fact, are so obvious" in any meaningful way. The sentence is
> not structured properly. I am not a grammar nazi by any stretch, and I
> structure sentences improperly all the time, but they usually still
> make sense. Dan's sentence might make sense to you, while my own seem
> nothing more than drivel, but I think that says more about you than it
> does about me. Still, if you want to get down to basics, we can,
> despite the fact that, as you point out, I do not get them.
Yes, his sentence does make perfect sense not just to me, but
apparently to anyone else who has read it. You are the only one who
has registered a complaint. I'm sorry you don't comprehend it, but
that says more about you than me, him or anyone else for that matter.
>
> If we rearrange the sentence in an attempt to clarify it, we get "the
> simplest things, after the fact, are so obvious, often times, until
> there is an issue with something." Now remove "often times", and "so",
> which are just extra fluff and do not really belong, and you have "the
> simplest things, after the fact, are obvious, until there is an issue
> with something". This is a bit easier to understand grammatically, but
> the problem here is that the statement is not true. Simple, obvious
> things tend to remain that way. Some unknown issue with something
> usually does not change that fact. You do not even need to rearrange
> the sentence to see this. Remove the fluff from the original: "Until
> there is an issue with something, the simplest things, after the fact,
> are obvious." Having seen the point he was trying to make, it is clear
> that this sentence is inadequate.
Inadequate for your comprehension, perhaps.
>
> Dan might have been better off using two sentences. I suggest: Often
> times, we do not realize there is a problem with something until there
> is an issue exposing it. And instead of "the simplest things, after
> the fact, are so obvious", he could have used a more tried and true
> cliche, such as "hindsight is 20/20". It is, after all, hard to argue
> with that logic. None of this changes the fact that drag racing is
> dangerous, but let's not nitpick, OK?
LMAO.... you're the one nitpicking. Dan could have expressed his
views in a variety of different ways, but he didn't. The way he chose
to express himself was clear and concise.
>
> I know that you will probably dismiss this as "drivel", even if you
> read through the whole thing. I probably wasted a few minutes of my
> time with this long, drawn out explanation, when the simple "huh?"
> that I used previously would normally suffice. However, I have been
> working on something that really isn't all that interesting to me and
> needed the break. I'm sure you mean well, and only have poor little
> Ashley's best interest in mind here.
Don't presume to know what my interests or intentions are.
>
> This leads us to the main problem. All this discussion about what
> makes a sensible sentence has been a distraction from the true nature
> of this discussion. What good is your discovery that strapping your
> ass to a rocket and going 300 mph can result in injury or death if you
> can't communicate it properly? How are you going to get John Force to
> realize the error of his ways? The man obviously knows way less than
> you do about how dangerous drag racing is, or else why would he let
> his defenseless daughter recklessly risk her life for no good reason?
> I'm sure she could achieve the same level of success in any endeavor
> of her choosing, so why race? Maybe she should quit racing today and
> start being a doctor or lawyer tomorrow. Given, she would have to be a
> damn good doctor or lawyer to replace the income from racing prize
> money, sponsorships, and her TV show, but that's not her decision to
> make, is it? You decide what the appropriate level of risk/reward is
> for her, and then tell her daddy what she can do.
Who said I would want to dissuade her from racing?!?!
>
> If you try a different tactic, and decide to write a note to Ashley
> Force, begging her to quit drag racing until they make it death-proof,
> and mail it to her pinned to a cute, cuddly teddy bear, I know you
> will want her to understand it when she reads it. If you write "Often
> times, until there is an issue with something, the simplest things,
> after the fact, are so obvious", her reaction will probably be "Huh?"
> She will probably just get right back into a race car, not even
> realizing that they are dangerous. She might even think she has some
> psycho stalker sending her teddy-grams in disjointed phrases and call
> the FBI or something. The FBI, knowing that gibberish notes pinned to
> cute, cuddly teddy bears are sure signs that some loon has snapped and
> is about to strike, will hunt you down and make you disappear. And
> that would just deepen this tragedy.
You're awfully full of yourself aren't you?!?!... suggesting how
people should rearrange their sentences to better suit you....
presuming to know what people are thinking and what actions they
should take as a result.... constructing a whole delusional fantasy
that centers around your (incorrect) assumptions....get over yourself
already, you truly come across as an egotistical ass.